Monday, July 27, 2020

Jeff Bailey Reviews Larry Rodness' OCTOBER 32nd


October 32nd by Larry Rodness was an unexpectedly excellent read, to say the least. The main character, Alexander Malefant is hiding from his emotional world as a traveling insurance salesman (his real job). He goes to a small-town during Halloween to sign some new clients and things get ‘wonky’ quick. Wait until he meets the ‘witch.’ The story was superbly written and structured to keep me off the scent of the real story for as long as possible. The ending was the best part: one of the most imaginative and twisty endings I’ve read in a long time. A clever cross between Stephen King and The Twilight Zone. The last five pages made October 32nd one of my favorite reads of the year and Larry Rodness one of my favorite new horror writers. For me, five stars to Larry Rodness and to October 32nd. Buy now on Amazon.



Not On My Watch is about a LCpl. Casandra Sing, a Marine aviation rescue firefighter. The inspiration for Cassie's character was the stories that my granddaughter, who was a Marine Corp. aviation rescue firefighter at the time of the writing. Elements of the story are also taken from my service in the Army Nuclear Weapons Program. LCpl. Sing witnesses the murder of two U.S. Army M.P.'s and decides that is her duty to stop the murderers. The situation gets complicated when she discovers that they have also stolen two nuclear weapons. Buy now on Amazon.


In The Defect, I tell the story of a terrorist attack on a nuclear power plant and why the government covered it up. The Defect is based on true events: The reactor accident at Three Mile Island NPS and a shooting incident at Watts Bar NPS. Some story elements come from years starting-up and operating nuclear power plants. In The Defect, I tell the story of what really happened at the power plant and why the government covered it up. Buy now on Amazon.




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Friday, July 24, 2020

Pam G. reviews Jeff Bailey's NOT ON MY WATCH



Pam G, "NOT ON MY WATCH by Jeff Bailey is the first book that I have read by this author. It is a military thriller that takes place in Oklahoma. Lance Corporal Cassandra Sing witnesses an event at the base’s north gate. With no way to communicate with others, she has to use her Marine training to attempt to prevent further damage.

Cassie was a compelling character and definitely someone that you could root for. The book started out with an intense situation and that suspense did not let up during most of the book. The reader gets some of Cassie’s backstory through a few flashbacks in time. Her goals were clear and her motivations seemed believable and well-drawn. There were no secondary characters with significant depth, but there was enough information on the antagonists to keep me engaged. The plot twists seemed believable and the stakes were high enough to make this a fast-paced page turner for me.

Overall, this was a dramatic, intense and absorbing novel that seemed feasible and all too real. If you enjoy military thrillers, then this [NOT ON MY WATCH] may be the next book for you."



Not On My Watch is about a LCpl. Casandra Sing, a Marine aviation rescue firefighter. The inspiration for Cassie's character was the stories that my granddaughter, who was a Marine Corp. aviation rescue firefighter at the time of the writing. Elements of the story are also taken from my service in the Army Nuclear Weapons Program. LCpl. Sing witnesses the murder of two U.S. Army M.P.'s and decides that is her duty to stop the murderers. The situation gets complicated when she discovers that they have also stolen two nuclear weapons. Buy now on Amazon.








In The Defect, I tell the story of a terrorist attack on a nuclear power plant and why the government covered it up. The Defect is based on true events: The reactor accident at Three Mile Island NPS and a shooting incident at Watts Bar NPS. Some story elements come from years starting-up and operating nuclear power plants. In The Defect, I tell the story of what really happened at the power plant and why the government covered it up. Buy now on Amazon.


Friday, June 26, 2020

An Author's Review of Alex Berenson's The Shadow Patrol

 Alex Berenson is one of my favorite thriller writers. I just finished The Shadow Patrol and it didn’t disappoint. The main protagonist, John Wells, is a CIA operative in Afghanistan with a unique skill set. He can go native in the local population and blend-in to point that he disappears. He can collect Intel and investigate where few other operatives can even go. Excellent!

One of the story aspects that I particularly like is that Berenson blends a bit of moral and ethical analysis into his characters idle times. These ‘musings’ add real depth to the back story. Of course, there is not much that I ever felt that I was reading the transcript of a Dr. Phil show. The Shadow Patrol had the feel and pace of a true CIA investigation. It was relentless.

For me, Alex Berenson and The Shadow Patrol were both five stars. Buy now on Amazon.

My name is Jeff Bailey I write action thrillers inspired by real events taken from everyday news. I also infuse elements of my near 50 years of experiences in nuclear weapons, nuclear power plants and nuclear research into my stories.



Not On My Watch is about a LCpl. Casandra Sing, a Marine aviation rescue firefighter. The inspiration for Cassie's character was the stories that my granddaughter, who was a Marine Corp. aviation rescue firefighter at the time of the writing. Elements of the story are also taken from my service in the Army Nuclear Weapons Program. LCpl. Sing witnesses the murder of two U.S. Army M.P.'s and decides that is her duty to stop the murderers. The situation gets complicated when she discovers that they have also stolen two nuclear weapons. Buy now on Amazon.





In The Defect, I tell the story of a terrorist attack on a nuclear power plant and why the government covered it up. The Defect is based on true events: The reactor accident at Three Mile Island NPS and a shooting incident at Watts Bar NPS. Some story elements come from years starting-up and operating nuclear power plants. In The Defect, I tell the story of what really happened at the power plant and why the government covered it up. Buy now on Amazon.



Saturday, October 6, 2018

Not On My Watch, a reading of the first pages by Jeff Bailey


I originally copyrighted NOT ON MY WATCH under the title I’M A MARINE. The screenwriters who worked on the project suggested the name change to NOT ON MY WATCH and I agreed. I also added some new story elements during the name change. The screenplay is available upon request at: jeff.bailey4007@gmail.com. These are the opening pages of NOT ON MY WATCH.

The burning metal superstructure surrounding Cassie hissed at her. The cockpit of a fighter jet was tight to begin with, but once it was crumple in a crash, it was almost too snug to allow her to take a deep breath. The heat was unbearable. She inched forward, feeling her way through the swirling smoke and trying to use her diaphragm and stomach to draw her breath instead of expanding her lungs. The roar of the flames overstimulated her hearing until all sound faded to white noise. She blew out a breath and pulled herself further into the burning structure. She tried to orient herself each time the occasional flashes of light from the flames penetrated the smoke enough for her to see shadows.
Cassie, Lance Corporal Cassandra Sing, USMC, estimated that one more squeeze into the void would bring her close enough to the pilot to feel for his body. An explosion sounded nearby, shaking the structure. The metal casement seemed to close in even tighter, intensifying her claustrophobia. The explosion also added to her sense of urgency. As if aviation fire rescue wasn’t dangerous enough, Cassie was a U.S. Marine aviation fire rescue specialist. When she fought an airplane fire or rescued a pilot, there was the possibility of live bullets and bombs in the plane. The explosion meant that she had to hurry. Burning flight fuel, bullets, and bombs don’t play well together.
Cassie maneuvered onto her side and reached forward with her free hand, making it even harder to draw a breath. But, her effort was rewarded. She felt the slack face of the Marine pilot just out of sight in the darkness. She pulled the small rescue-breathing mask from the Velcro connector on the shoulder of her canvas fire jacket and fitted it over the pilot’s face. Procedures dictated that she first protect the pilot’s ability to breathe whenever there was a possible nuclear weapon or nuclear material onboard the aircraft. Aspirated radioactive metals wreak havoc on the human body. With the mask in place, she reached back down to her waist, retrieved her field knife, and cut the pilot free of his harness. The heat was beginning to leach through her fire jacket.
The pilot fell against Cassie like a sack of wet sand and pinned her head against the metal structure. The loss of that tiny bit of space compounded her growing claustrophobia. Another small shot of panic coursed through her as the adrenaline hit her blood stream. She couldn’t suppress a little scream. The roar of the fire consumed the sound. She could not give in to panic. A fellow Marine’s life was at stake. She would not falter.
After blowing out another breath, she inched her way back out the way she entered, pulling the dead-weight of the pilot behind her. Breathe, scoot, pull, breathe, scoot, pull. She had a long way to go.
As she moved, she heard the report of an incredibly loud Claxton horn from somewhere outside the burning fuselage. The flames stopped with a whispered, final puff. The smoke swirled away. The recorded roar of the fire stopped. The metal fuselage lifted off her from above and pivoted away on hinges. In relief, Cassie took a quick, deep breath. She, and the pilot next to her, turned to look up at the cloudless, blue sky above them. Both pulled off their breathing apparatus and turned their attention to the fire training NCO standing over them.
The sergeant gave one short order, “I’m terminating this confined spaces exercise. Corporal Sing fall-in with the rest of your class.”
As the NCO turned back to the rest of the class, the acting pilot jumped up and offered Cassie a hand up, which she accepted.
As he pulled her to her feet, he said with real sincerity, “Thanks for saving my butt today, Marine.”
He put his fist out at chest level. Cassie fist bumped the offered compliment, and replied with an, “Oorah.” Lance Corporal Cassandra Sing was not only smaller than most Marines, at five foot four, she was smaller than most female Marines. After the bump, she pulled her fist away quickly. She didn’t want anyone to see that her hands were still shaking.
As she took her place in ranks with her class, she dropped her fire helmet and air pack at her feet and waited for the members of the class to settle down. She also did a quick scan of the surrounding area (Marine training becomes instinctive). The fire-training facility looked like the open tarmac of a major airport: flat, hard, and barren of anything living or flammable. It seemed like she could see forever. The open countryside of Central Oklahoma was the perfect location for a military fire-training center. The nuclear weapons facilities on the other side of the base made it equally ideal for a nuclear materials fire-training center.
Cassie’s class consisted of firefighters from all five branches of the service. Some were aviation fire fighters like her. Others were trained shipboard, submarine, and even structural firefighters. The students at the school included pilots who might fly a plane with a nuclear weapon on board, medics who might treat Americans exposed to radiation, RadCon (Radiation Control) technicians who might evaluate an area or building for radiation safety, bomb squad specialists who might neutralize a nuclear weapon, and firefighters who might fight a nuclear-weapon-involved aviation fire. They all had one thing in common. They were collectively on temporary duty at the Fort Sill Nuclear Weapons Depot to learn to fight a fire when nuclear materials or nuclear weapons might be present.
Three men in uniform stood in front of the class. One was the training NCO, dressed in Army utilities, who personally supervised the day-to-day instruction. The second was the commanding officer of the training facility. He wore an immaculate, khaki office uniform. The third man was obviously an Army officer, but he wore a stereotypical civilian fire captain’s uniform.
The class training NCO spoke up. “We’re suspending the training schedule for the rest of the afternoon. Class will resume at zero seven hundred tomorrow in classroom six. Read chapter five in your training manual, Elements of Radiation Detection. There may be quiz at the start of class tomorrow. This is Base Fire Marshall McDermott. Listen up!”
The Fire Marshall didn’t waste any words. “Ladies and gentlemen, we have a situation. We have an expanding grass fire on the north perimeter of the base. Normally, we only monitor a grass fire as long as it doesn’t threaten any structures or lives. This fire is quickly approaching the perimeter fence, which means that it is going to spread into the surrounding civilian countryside. That’s unacceptable. The base commander has authorized me to mobilize this fire-training class to assist the base fire brigade to fight this fire.”
Fire Marshall McDermott realized for the first time that Cassie was wearing desert style utility boots. He stopped addressing the class and focused on her, “Marine, where are your fire boots?”
Cassie snapped to attention, “Sir, the fire training locker does not have regulation fire boots in my size. I have special permission to train in utilities.”
McDermott considered this for a moment then said, “Very well, but you will avoid hot spots, is that clear.”
“Clear, sir.”
McDermott turned back to the class, “It’s time to stretch your legs, get dirty, and fight a real fire. Report to the equipment locker room and equipment-up for a grass fire. Fall-in at the staging area in ten minutes.”
McDermott abruptly turned his back to the class and started a conversation with the Training officer.
The training NCO stepped up and shouted, “Fall out!”

  My name is Jeff Bailey. I write action/thrillers with a nuclear theme because I worked in nuclear related industries, from nuclear weapons to nuclear research, for fifty years. In The DefectI tell the story of a terrorist attack on a nuclear power plant and why the government covered it up. I based the story on true events. Deer Hawk Publications has scheduled to release of Not On My Watch. Not On My Watch is about a female, aviation firefighter in the U.S. Marines who witnesses the murder of two M.P.s. She decides that it is her duty to stop them. The screenplay version of Not On My Watch is available on request. Keep in mind that I write nuclear thrillers. The Chilcoat Project is about the theft of nuclear weapons secrets from a national laboratory. True events form the core of the story-line of The Chilcoat Project. The Radioactive Boy Scout is the inspiration for my current project, Wine Country, a case of industrial sabotage. The screenplay version of Wine Countris in development. I have five more thrillers story-boarded for future development.


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Sunday, October 8, 2017

The Entertainer Newspaper, Laura Kostad, Review of The Defect by Jeff Bailey


My name is Jeff Bailey. I write nuclear thrillers for a reason, I’ve worked in nuclear related industries, from nuclear weapons to nuclear research, for fifty years. Deer Hawk Publications released my first book, The Defect in June of 2016. In The Defect, I tell the story of a terrorist attack on a nuclear power plant and why the government covered it up. The Defect is based on true events. Deer Hawk Publications is scheduled to release I’m a Marine in the summer of 2017. I’m a Marine is about a female aviation firefighter in the U.S. Marines who witnesses the murder of two M.P.s. She decides that it is her duty to stop them. Keep in mind that I write nuclear thrillers. The Chilcoat Project, to be released in spring of 2018, is about the theft of nuclear weapons secrets from a national laboratory. The Chilcoat Project is also based on true events. My current project, Wine Country, is based on the true story of the Radioactive Boy Scout, but with a more sinister twist.

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Tuesday, September 19, 2017

Writing Realistic Backstory Characters by Jeff Bailey



I write nuclear thrillers. As such, the thriller is the main story and the characters are backstory. In other genres, such as romantic comedies, recovery dramas, and memoirs, the characters are the main story and the world around them is the backstory. While characters must have a high degree of consistency in all novels, it is particularly difficult to write consistent characters as backstory when the main plot drives the majority of the story development. Every ounce of backstory development must be spot on.
I have an added impediment to believable backstory character development. I’ve been a scientist and engineer for fifty years. I know the terrorist story that I want to tell. But, I am somewhat stunted when it comes to understanding how people socially react in given situations, how they verbally share themselves, and what situations they might encounter as part of my story. For me, writing social interactions, believable dialog, and emotional motivations is as foreign as writing upside down.
I have, however, found a ways around my developmental shortcomings. The most obvious single solution is that I listen to and heed the advice of my editors, my beta readers, and my wife. These collaborators know what part of my writing leaves them wanting more. If they aren’t satisfied, my readers in general won’t be satisfied. I had to learn my second most usable character consistency tool, the thesauruses.
Negative Trait Thesaurus

I have two character development bibles: The Positive Trait Thesaurus and The NegativeTrait Thesaurus, both by writing gurus Ackerman and Puglisi. The respective references itemize an extensive range of character-associated traits. The body of the texts then provides stunningly accurate analysis of those traits, a revelation.
I have to start the process from scratch. For each protagonist, I search the index of the two thesauruses for the three positive trait and one negative trait that I feel most describes my intended character. I reverse the order for my antagonist. I pick three negative traits and one positive trait. No character should be all good or all bad. Then I read, reread, highlight, reread, and reread again the sections of the thesauruses that discusses these traits.
Positive Trait Thesaurus
As I write, I periodically review the discussions on these three traits. I need my characters to exhibit similar attributes and associated behaviors. I have flashbacks that are consistent with the possible causes list. I screen my characters’ actions to be true to the associated behaviors, thoughts, and emotions examples. If I stay within the boundaries of my four selected traits, my characters should feel true for my readers.
When my manuscript is completed, I often face one last challenge. I review the story to make sure that I’ve included enough character development to satisfy the story. After all, I’m a science nerd and thriller writer. My last story scan is focused on developing scenes that do nothing more than contribute to the character backstories. There always seems to be a couple of gaps in the flow of the scenes. I look at the examples from film and challenging scenarios sections of the thesauruses. If I mix these two sections with the main story line, a couple of new scenes seem to present themselves that are consistent with the characters that I want my reader to believe. These bonus scenes usually seem intentional and true to the overall story line.
With more than a hundred fully developed traits developed in both references, there is no end to wealth of characters that even I can develop. Even my thrillers would be ‘less than’ without backstory characters. 


The Defect
My name is Jeff Bailey. I write nuclear thrillers for a reason, I’ve worked in nuclear related industries, from nuclear weapons to nuclear research, for fifty years. Deer Hawk Publications released my first book, The Defect in June of 2016. In The Defect, I tell the story of a terrorist attack on a nuclear power plant and why the government covered it up. The Defect is based on true events. Deer Hawk Publications is scheduled to release I’m a Marine in the summer of 2017. I’m a Marine is about a female aviation firefighter in the U.S. Marines who witnesses the murder of two M.P.s. She decides that it is her duty to stop them. Keep in mind that I write nuclear thrillers. The Chilcoat Project, to be released in spring of 2018, is about the theft of nuclear weapons secrets from a national laboratory. The Chilcoat Project is also based on true events. My current project, Wine Country, is based on the true story of the Radioactive Boy Scout, but with a more sinister twist.

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Saturday, August 12, 2017

ReNewzit, Behind the Scenes, by Jeff Bailey


ReNewzit

A couple of weeks ago, a project that I contributed to, in a small way, was completed. The project was the short film, ReNewzit, by screenwriter and producer Randy LaBarge and director Nat Saenz of 2047 Productions. ReNewzit is a locally produced comedy short about an amazing cleaning product.
Randy LaBarge

I can’t show the actual film, yet, but I can show the ‘Behind the Scenes’ video. I know that ReNewzit proper is entered as a short film at WorldCon in Messukeskus, Helsinki,Finland, from August 9th to the 13th. ReNewzit is also entered in the Tri-Fi Film Festival in Richland, Washington in October. If the producer enters ReNewzit into other
Nat Saenz
film festivals, I’ll post an alert. As soon as the season’s film festivals are completed and I have permission from Nat Saenz, I’ll post a link to the film itself. It’s a crack up.

As I said, I had a small part in the production. The credits list me as a ‘Script Assistant.’ I actually spent part of my time as a ‘grip’ and part of my time carrying a clipboard and recording scene sequence information (that’s the script assistant part.)

Jeff Bailey
While I didn’t actually have a role as a writer, I learned so much that the experience was almost overwhelming. Seeing how these artists put a scene together and how much effort was applied to every detail was an education in itself. I was surprised at how much I found that I could apply to the process of writing a novel. I immediately came home after the final day of shooting and rewrote some of my chapters. I have started advising new writers to write a scene as though you were describing a movie to a blind man. I’m still applying some of what I learned to my latest project. For me, the experience was like cross-training in the sports world.

 As authors, if you ever get a chance to work/volunteer on the writing and/or production of a film (of any length) with a truly professional crew, I highly recommend the experience. I can’t wait for my next opportunity to work ‘behind the scenes.’





My name is Jeff Bailey. I write nuclear thrillers for a reason, I’ve worked in nuclear related industries, from nuclear weapons to nuclear research, for fifty years. Deer Hawk Publications released my first book, The Defect in June of 2016. In The Defect, I tell the story of a terrorist attack on a nuclear power plant and why the government covered it up. The Defect is based on true events. Deer Hawk Publications is scheduled to release I’m a Marine in the summer of 2017. I’m a Marine is about a female aviation firefighter in the U.S. Marines who witnesses the murder of two M.P.s. She decides that it is her duty to stop them. Keep in mind that I write nuclear thrillers. The Chilcoat Project, to be released in spring of 2018, is about the theft of nuclear weapons secrets from a national laboratory. The Chilcoat Project is also based on true events. My current project, Wine Country, is based on the true story of the Radioactive Boy Scout, but with a more sinister twist.

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